At Dusk I'Ll Rise Poem by khadija shaker

At Dusk I'Ll Rise

Rating: 4.4


You are overwhelmed and frustrated within,
You always just seemed to be on my side
But inside of your heart lies,
The untold truth that is
Shinning on your eyes.

You always want to put me down
Trying hard to decrease my happiness
Gossiping about me is meaningless
But still at dusk I’ll rise

Those teardrops are heavy to fall
From my fragile eyes
This word is slowly killing me
Whispering around my self
But still like dust i’ll rise

Do you want to write me down in history with your lies?
Weak heart, knowing-less mind
You are trying to spill blood on my dreams
Unbelieving the words i say inside
But still like fog I’ll rise

Wanting me to feel that my life is almost over
There is no point of living
But still like dawn I’ll rise

I’ll fly
Far from those mind
Far to inhabitant word
With those broken wings
I’ll rise
I’ll rise
I’ll rise

I’ll continue flying
Till I reach the oasis
Where the luster sparked
My intense emotions building up
My feeling is sky hope to reach
As I walked out and in
I’ll forever rise



March 25

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ash Moore (NEW POEM!) 09 April 2009

this one is amazing, yes, thankyou for pointing this one out.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 April 2009

Yes my friend............you shall rise like phoenix.................Good Write

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

the flow fits perfectly.. and the poem..amazing

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 April 2009

Beautifully and exquisitely written.10++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 08 May 2009

I’ll continue flying Till I reach the oasis Where the luster sparked My intense emotions building up My feeling is sky hope to reach As I walked out and in I’ll forever rise..................yeah u shall rise like a phoenix................a good write..........

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Chinedu Dike 23 November 2014

An inspirational poem, written with conviction and insight to capture the essence of the piece. A well articulated piece with a powerful message - FAITH. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 01 October 2009

I Love this poem! ! ! ! Its so expressive such feeling and pictures Good Job^^

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2009

I’ll continue flying Till I reach the oasis Where the luster sparked My intense emotions building up My feeling is sky hope to reach As I walked out and in I’ll forever rise............... i will rise with the rising of yellow sun with al high hopes disregarding what otheres did to me.. this is philosophy of life....you got to go alone andnever beafraid of what is happening to yu.. it is good sign also....10 read mine ....you go alone........go back......sun

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Aziz Alkaabi 02 September 2009

First, I welcome you here. I agree with Mubeen and I think this is one of your finest, so far. You have a nice poettess hiding in you and she will reveal more of her creativity and talent in times to come. Good work.

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