poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Audacity Of Hope

heart beacons as finds its bliss
by gleams of delight when splash
and croons like flow of ripples
by sweet breeze in summer.

oh what a audacity of hope avows!
bird being emancipated soars high
beckoning from ruck of own delusion
heaving sigh of insinuating within.

spumes of blue spruces up hill
by the subtlety of reverence,
as alacrity of soul parades over
despondency of own of demeanor.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 12, 2011

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (7/12/2010 7:40:00 PM)

    I agree with ' Pradnya P' below...this is poetry at its best! 'Adacity of Hope'is when
    heart beacons as find bliss
    by gleans of delight when splash
    and croons like flow of ripples
    by sweet breeze in summer
    Now, this is the adacity of hope!

    A 10++++

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  • Ratnaprabha Raykar (12/18/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    THIS IS POETRY! ! ! ! ! ! hats off to you for your wonderful poem.

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  • Pradnya P (12/4/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    Fantablous poem
    absloutely great composition of words and
    after reading it places u in a diff world
    nice one

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  • Moushumi moushumi (12/2/2009 9:47:00 AM)

    'spumes of blue spruces up hill
    by the subtlety of reverence, '- Awesome lines i cherished the hidden travel

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (11/29/2009 4:30:00 AM)

    From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Re: hello,

    Dear fellow poet
    your poems were wonderful
    you are very talented
    I enjoyed reading your other poems to.
    I look up to you.
    Thank you.

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  • Prashant ShauryaPrashant Shaurya (11/12/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    excellent writing accompanied by a brilliant flor
    flawless is the word sir..
    10++++++

    regards
    prashant

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (11/9/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. Well penned.
    Meaningful creation.
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me
    10+

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  • Shiela Marie AnunciacionShiela Marie Anunciacion (11/9/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    This is a really powerful poem ^_^ thanks for recommending it..

    Hope you could read 'Standing By the Shore' if you have time also ^_^

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  • Lynda Robson (11/6/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    Excellent write as always from you Dr, hope you are now fully recovered from your accident
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Sivashanmugam ShanmugamSivashanmugam Shanmugam (11/5/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    nice poem..need not to say this is a poem that ''croons like flow of ripple''
    comes as melodious voice

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  • Sandhya S N (11/5/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    Sure it is..
    always the thrive of hope rides the man forward..
    very positive approach
    with very powerful works
    regards
    sandhya

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  • Nathanial Jones (11/4/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    I love the last four lines... very talented words!

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (11/1/2009 4:57:00 PM)

    the voice of hope can never be silenced.

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  • Moonbee CanadyMoonbee Canady (11/1/2009 12:07:00 AM)

    I Put This, in my Fav's... Very Good Poem... I Like The Topic, The lovely-flow and beautifully passionate wording... Each Stanza was superb... MoonBee

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/30/2009 6:41:00 AM)

    Hi Dr Kar audacity of hope was a real hope poem

    keep up the good expression we poets all benefit from each others expression expression in life is the key to happiness
    Regards Rehana yakoob Read my latest poem
    The way you think and kindly comment

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  • Alison Cassidy (10/30/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    A brilliant title using a phrase that is bold and outrageous. The poem that follows is bright and explosively positive - definitely a major key - (might I suggest D major, the key of joy) . Excellent write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Lynn Glover (10/29/2009 6:21:00 PM)

    You took us to the center of your poem with your poetic words then showed us the beauty of your surroundings. A very good write. A 10 Your friend Lynn

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  • Stacey Watts (10/29/2009 3:40:00 PM)

    very well written and nicely done poem. again the imagery is fantastic and the message clear. Excellent.

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  • Anju Addanki (10/29/2009 4:48:00 AM)

    A well versed, simple, hopeful poem very good.

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  • Maurice HarrisMaurice Harris (10/29/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    Great poem! ! Beautiful, yet simple...it paints a picture with words!

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