heart beacons as finds its bliss
by gleams of delight when splash
and croons like flow of ripples
by sweet breeze in summer.
oh what a audacity of hope avows!
bird being emancipated soars high
beckoning from ruck of own delusion
heaving sigh of insinuating within.
spumes of blue spruces up hill
by the subtlety of reverence,
as alacrity of soul parades over
despondency of own of demeanor.
Excellent poem. Well penned. Meaningful creation. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
This is a really powerful poem ^_^ thanks for recommending it.. Hope you could read 'Standing By the Shore' if you have time also ^_^
Excellent write as always from you Dr, hope you are now fully recovered from your accident 10 Lynda xx
nice poem..need not to say this is a poem that ''croons like flow of ripple'' comes as melodious voice
I agree with ' Pradnya P' below...this is poetry at its best! 'Adacity of Hope'is when heart beacons as find bliss by gleans of delight when splash and croons like flow of ripples by sweet breeze in summer Now, this is the adacity of hope! A 10++++
THIS IS POETRY! ! ! ! ! ! hats off to you for your wonderful poem.
Fantablous poem absloutely great composition of words and after reading it places u in a diff world nice one
'spumes of blue spruces up hill by the subtlety of reverence, '- Awesome lines i cherished the hidden travel
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent writing accompanied by a brilliant flor flawless is the word sir.. 10++++++ regards prashant