Audacity Of Hope Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Audacity Of Hope

Rating: 4.6


heart beacons as finds its bliss
by gleams of delight when splash
and croons like flow of ripples
by sweet breeze in summer.

oh what a audacity of hope avows!
bird being emancipated soars high
beckoning from ruck of own delusion
heaving sigh of insinuating within.

spumes of blue spruces up hill
by the subtlety of reverence,
as alacrity of soul parades over
despondency of own of demeanor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 30 October 2009

Hi Dr Kar audacity of hope was a real hope poem keep up the good expression we poets all benefit from each others expression expression in life is the key to happiness Regards Rehana yakoob Read my latest poem The way you think and kindly comment

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Moonbee Canady 01 November 2009

I Put This, in my Fav's... Very Good Poem... I Like The Topic, The lovely-flow and beautifully passionate wording... Each Stanza was superb... MoonBee

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Louis Rams 01 November 2009

the voice of hope can never be silenced.

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Nathanial Jones 04 November 2009

I love the last four lines... very talented words!

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Sandhya S N 05 November 2009

Sure it is.. always the thrive of hope rides the man forward.. very positive approach with very powerful works regards sandhya

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 July 2010

I agree with ' Pradnya P' below...this is poetry at its best! 'Adacity of Hope'is when heart beacons as find bliss by gleans of delight when splash and croons like flow of ripples by sweet breeze in summer Now, this is the adacity of hope! A 10++++

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 18 December 2009

THIS IS POETRY! ! ! ! ! ! hats off to you for your wonderful poem.

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Pradnya P 04 December 2009

Fantablous poem absloutely great composition of words and after reading it places u in a diff world nice one

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Moushumi moushumi 02 December 2009

'spumes of blue spruces up hill by the subtlety of reverence, '- Awesome lines i cherished the hidden travel

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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