Autumn’s Dance Poem by Angelina Pandian

Autumn’s Dance

Rating: 4.9

The leaves were slowly falling
So very slowly and dropping
Ever so gently like a butterfly
Which glides and is also seen flirting,
The gentle breeze now awake
Sets the leaves in a twirl of dance
So capricious like our minds
So full of sudden fancy
The breeze shakes them in frenzy
Gliding, flying and fluttering
Blown up, coming down in confusion
The breeze, spent, now rests
The leaves are now again slowly falling!

Mubeen Sadhika 07 August 2009

Soft. Beautiful expressions.

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rago rago 20 July 2009

autumn is the season nice always to remember for joy........ perfect expressions......

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Yelena M. 03 July 2009

Autumn is always associated for me first and foremost with dance of yellow leaves across the streets...Your poem is a unique and exquisite expression, thanks very much for sharing with us. Best wishes. A.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

nice imaginative ideas breezing inside a poetic mind...good work Leena...thanks

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a lovely dance well pictured...the breeze shows up in the leaf...lovely

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 April 2011

Excellent dance for the coming Winter!

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Ken E Hall 23 February 2010

Lovely autumn poem dancing leaves such a wonderful time of the year as you have constructed in superb imagery thanks+++++10 regards

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Pamela Lutwyche 16 February 2010

This is poetry in motion. I love the way you have written this. I could see those leaves being butterflies.

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Spiritwind Wood 04 October 2009

nicely written, makes me miss summer already

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Rakesh Bedi 29 September 2009

To me this poem depicts a very minute sense of observation of the poet. All of us must have watched this happening some time or other. But, dear, it was you who scripted it so beautifully. I must say, you are a very keen observer, angel!

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