Aya Nasr

Rookie - 11 Points (17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

Awake - Poem by Aya Nasr

Keeping myself awake
till my face touched by sun light
tired, waiting …
thought that might
somebody still notice me
to tell me good night

Comments about Awake by Aya Nasr

  • (4/22/2015 3:59:00 AM)

    A desire of melancholic proportions, can feel the deep hope of finding someone to love you unconditionally. A subtle yet intense poem of wanting a mature love. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Joshua Terpening (9/30/2014 4:36:00 PM)

    There is an innate need to be loved... Much love and light! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/29/2013 9:29:00 PM)

    Staying awake is important for poets. Allowing our poetic energy time to mature. Thanks for sharing my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Jay Alexander (11/30/2013 4:28:00 PM)

    This is a really good poem, simple and very poignant.

    To improve the scansion and effect would have written it slightly differently:

    Keeping myself awake,
    Till my face is
    Touched by sunlight....

    Thought someone
    Might notice -
    And tell me goodnight.

    Hope u like this slight adjustment.

    Goodnight - Jay
    (Report) Reply

  • Kareem Sameh (9/28/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    its an out of this world (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 26, 2013

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