Awake Poem by Aya Nasr

Awake

Rating: 4.5


Keeping myself awake
till my face touched by sun light
tired, waiting …
thought that might
somebody still notice me
to tell me good night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 22 April 2015

A desire of melancholic proportions, can feel the deep hope of finding someone to love you unconditionally. A subtle yet intense poem of wanting a mature love. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Joshua Terpening 30 September 2014

There is an innate need to be loved... Much love and light!

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Staying awake is important for poets. Allowing our poetic energy time to mature. Thanks for sharing my friend!

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Jay Alexander 30 November 2013

This is a really good poem, simple and very poignant. To improve the scansion and effect would have written it slightly differently: Keeping myself awake, Till my face is Touched by sunlight.... Thought someone Might notice - And tell me goodnight. Hope u like this slight adjustment. Goodnight - Jay

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Kareem Sameh 28 September 2013

its an out of this world

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