Flew Away (Happy May P2) * Poem by Aya Nasr

Flew Away (Happy May P2) *

Rating: 4.5


Spring of May...
You became so far away
Everything around me became grey
You're not only spring of May
You're spring of everyday

You haunt my inner diary
Your picture doesn't leave
I think you stole my heart
What a harsh sticky thief!

I'm trying to stop thinking of thee
You flew away but still occupying me
I'm crying begging to set my love free
Let it fly let it beat, its my wish so mote it be!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 23 August 2013

Well-structured poem! ! ! ! I like it!

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Mohammad Skati 23 August 2013

I read your pretty poem. You have great imagination that helps you too much. I loved your poem. Keep writing more. Thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2013

A beautiful poem on spring.

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Benjamin Wiche 24 August 2013

nice piece... You haunt my inner diary Your picture doesn't leave I think you stole my heart What a harsh sticky thief!

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Unwritten Soul 18 September 2013

No doubt a great poem here...loved it_Soul

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Chris Hickman 02 September 2013

Well Written. Good Job!

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Vivian Nguyen 26 August 2013

This poem should have a better beat and grammar...

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Patricia Grantham 24 August 2013

Love in the springtime is ever so beautiful. It blooms like the flowers. Sooner or later the love that flourish will fade away like the fresh flowers. Hopefully the seeds of love will remain. Nice write.

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Abdallah Gamal 24 August 2013

Wo0o0o0o0o0w, a well-written poem, keep up the good work :)

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