Aye Jeevan Priye... Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Aye Jeevan Priye...

Rating: 3.3


aye jeevan priye,
tu kyun vyarth hi rota hai
inn ashruo ke andhiyaron me,
kyun vyarth hi sota hai.

Chal chala chal uss pag par
jahaan antarnirman hota hai
unn mithya megh ki gunjon se
kyun hatotsahit hota hai.


This is my first poem in Hindi Language (My mother tongue)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009

hi vaibhav just a suggestion...why don't you put an english translation

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Vidi Writes 05 October 2009

Hindlish me Kavitha...? ? Muje tumhari ye yochana dhara Lagi bahuth achi tarah. Vishay bhi bahoth swadisht lagah Aur ye shaili bhi man me payi jagah.

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Moushumi moushumi 28 September 2009

yeh jeevan hain, is jeevan ka ehi hain rang roop...nice poem...carry on with translation so that others can take the essence.10***

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fleur de lys 27 September 2009

The first of many celebrated poems Vaibhav. I don't understand it of course but I'm sure it sounds divine when recited and I would sincerely love to read the translation.

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Mamta Agarwal 26 September 2009

jahan antarnirman hota hai- bahut achha likha hai, Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2009

'ashruo ke andhiyaron me sona'...nice expression Vaibhav...i liked...thanks...10

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