Nagourta

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Bad Air - Poem by Nagourta

The hands come under the doorcrack.
The hands creep through the window.
The sunlight doesn't touch me.
The hands come and they touch me.
And I suffer...


Comments about Bad Air by Nagourta

  • (9/14/2016 3:45:00 PM)

    Great poem with a profound metaphor and strong symmetry. (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (4/7/2010 1:27:00 PM)

    Rich in a raw rabidity reality that is reality for many. Thanks for sharing my friend. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/17/2009 7:59:00 PM)

    very personal, helpless and sad, well done

    <3
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  • (5/1/2009 12:44:00 AM)

    a mysterious yet superb write..well done (Report)Reply

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  • (3/16/2009 10:00:00 PM)

    The utter helplessness here feels unbearable, especially when the last line is absorbed. A very expressive and interpretive poem, a superb piece to your collection. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    its a bit sad but also good (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 6, 2009



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