Barmaid And A Drunkard Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Barmaid And A Drunkard

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The rural bar is always full.
Pungent smoke and the vapour of spirits
Intoxicate her before it's closed.
A young drunkard journalist as a habit
Who stays until the bar closed?
And he drops her to the threshold of her house.
She finds a day to talk him about their future
But it's very hard as the guy is not sober at all.
Very seldom he comes now and it's stopped all of a sudden.
She goes home alone after the bar closed
And a small twinkling star guides the entire walk.
One day she found in a customer's newspaper her lost soul's obituary.
She left the bar before it closed and murmured on the way
'I am not afraid and I feel that he comes with me along my life.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 05 November 2006

A beautiful tale is told in this one, hope in the guiding starlight along our path Thankyou, Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 02 November 2006

What a pity that the poor girl put any dependence in the drunken journalist from the start. I am sure the star's light grew even dimmer after his tragic death.Her life story is a sad story indeed. Very well written, Nimal. Regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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