Li'l One

Bathing In The Waters Of The Heavens

I hear it before I see it
Pounding loudly
Drumming wildly
My heart wants to join in
I want to run naked through it
Feel the droplets pounding my skin
Bathing in the waters of the heavens

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 13, 2007
Poem Edited: Friday, March 11, 2011

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/7/2008 1:53:00 AM)

    i can't wait to be in there..............really i am.................

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  • rajagopal haranrajagopal haran (11/6/2007 7:00:00 AM)

    poem in a nut shell; great

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  • Meggie Gultiano (10/6/2007 7:06:00 AM)

    This is nice, Emmalene..lovely and short
    hugs,
    Meggie

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  • Vincent James Turner (6/13/2007 12:35:00 PM)

    what a lovely title Emmalene, and as for the poem it too is a wonderful basic human desire too run out and bathe in the waters of heaven. I think this poem works becuase it strikes an accord with many and the images are nice.

    best wishes

    Robin

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  • Colin J...Colin J... (6/13/2007 12:28:00 PM)

    Emmalene, this is a lovely poem, short and to the point,
    There is nothing more beautiful than warn, refreshing rain.

    Keep bathing, Colin J...

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