I am on way to fight a long battle!
My Mind is a battle field.
Where...
There is no weapons
No sword or dagger
No man
No animals
No soldiers
No bombs
No bloodshed
Today My mind is not less than a battle field
My thoughts are clashing with one another.
Today, there is battle of thoughts!
On one side is
My gloominess
My anger
My sorrow
My hatred
On which I have to overcome with...
Other side is
My love
My peace
My confidence
My happiness.
I am solely responsible to captivate my happiness.
I have to set it free from this cage.
Winner if I am...
I will wear a crown of love in my heart
I will host a Flag of happiness in my mind.
My voice will sing a song of peace!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
©2014
As far as thoughts are concerned both the Hindi version and English version are the great poems. I know Hindi is not your mother tongue but you have full control on English language. That is why you are amazing in presenting your thoughts in this poem. On the other hand a Hindi reader understands you more as Hindi immediately touches his heart.
I like it, A good poem, we all have to cope with all that life throws at us and keep a happy frame of mind.
This battle always goes on inside everyone. Let good win. I read your Hindi original also. Your translation retained all the essence and beauty. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mind is battle field where good thoughts and bad thoughts are fighting. On the one side love, peace; confidence and happiness and on the other side there are gloominess; hatred; anger; sorrow and hatred. The last stanza expresses.... Winner if I am... I will wear a crown of love in my heart I will host a Flag of happiness in my mind. My voice will sing a song of peace! A brilliant poem amazingly shared.10