Be Strong Poem by lady grace

Be Strong

Rating: 4.7


worry not my little angel
real heroes don't cry
show me not your lonely tears
unlock your heart from too much fears...

angels above spread their wings
to guard and protect you from harm
let selfish mouths bury the truth
hide hundred words from their envious hearts...

everyday has a beginning
seen in early morning light
let not your heart be like theirs
accept that what it feels is right...

bees sting if they are hurt
dogs bite when they are needled
eagles snatch their preys with claws
why shed tears when it's not needed...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
April Rose Sta Cruz 23 July 2009

nice well done my friend i love ur latest poem yehey

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Obed Souza 17 July 2009

Wonderful poem! Thanks, my dear for your lovely poem/comment on' The Seed'. Keep in touch.

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Ted M 16 July 2009

A lovely advice, helping a child to get over fears and learn to grow. Lovely.10+++

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Eyan Desir 15 July 2009

interesting poem It really makes one think.... and woder for a while good job

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Fay Slimm 15 July 2009

Loving advice given to a child - and here it is enveloped in imagery which enhances the whole verse.... a fine piece....10 + ++ Fay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2009

bees sting if they are hurt dogs bite when they are needled eagles snatch their preys with claws why shed tears when it's not needed... tears should beshed only in dark where no body sees to it. it may bring shame otherwise.. beautiful poem and u have poured all ur mioght n feelings in it.. i liekd it mose....10 read mine cry not

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Jester's P 27 July 2009

the title itself is already a strong push to be more- and fully human....to feel the emotion deep with in. the poem is enough to be qualified as legacy of poetry.

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Akram Awadat 27 July 2009

wonderful poem, fantastic thanks a lot

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Carla Joy Cuala 26 July 2009

everyday is a beggining seen in the morning light.. the real lines you have in that poem, , , regards! carla

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

hey this is such a wondrful poem again my dear lady... but to this line i gota say some thing 'dogs bite when they are needled'... you know i love dogs, i v this sweet friend of mine.. she sleeps hugging her cute dog... i ll tell you.. if tamed and loved.. if show them the kind real love.. they will never bite us, but a man can easily bite you bed you know that..... show the kinda love.. to dogs, they will never ever bite you..always be faithful to you.. but these days it s hard to trust some men arent they.. that's how ungraceful this world has crumbled in to my dear Lady Grace! ! ! Sorry, some times i get away with my comments.. anyway i loved this one too! ! ! ! 10+++ with lots of love shan

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