The Wedding Poem by lady grace

The Wedding

Rating: 4.7


i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

the pain is still here
with sadness and anger
today may be the end
tomorrow is never a fine..

this man who'll be my groom
is as good as Homer
a monster from the north
captured me as his lover..

i never love this man before
but he never let me go
he give me no freedom
only to find..i love him too....

for all those days of confusions
my hours filled with loneliness
all i see is his perfect love
a true love which is always the best...

perhaps it's just a fair
to think that i am a bride to be
morning comes with no illusion
a celebration for wedding anniversary..

and as the ceremony starts
my eyes filled with tears
he is lying in white satin
while everybody stands with me...

today...as we celebrate our anniversary
no other words i can say
i love you so much
'happy silver wedding anniversary'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 June 2009

I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 15 June 2009

The end of the story surprise me in sadness, it's like a real piece which i saw with my own eyes, tks for sharing

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Vibhu Ashok 14 June 2009

You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.

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Vibhu Ashok 14 June 2009

You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes.

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Adeeb Alfateh 09 June 2019

for all those days of confusions my hours filled with loneliness all i see is his perfect love a true love which is always the best... great write 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Camagu Somana 26 September 2018

lady grace i love your poem...

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 17 November 2017

so nice one i read it keep it up and do some good poems on love and lust

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Hirak Mishra 21 October 2017

Fantastic

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Tapan M. Saren 15 April 2017

Beautiful very beautiful poem.....

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