A Simple Journey Poem by lady grace

A Simple Journey

Rating: 4.3


oh how sweet are the words from your lips
the words full of hope and promises
oh how sweet to hear those whispers
whispers with jokes and naughty phrase...

am i still the apple of your eyes?
the princess of your life?
am i still the goddess of love?
the only woman who owns your heart? ..

lord, bless me coz i love this man
teach me to create words of love
help me to reach his lonely heart
bring these words to fill his empty life...

who are you to blame me
who are they to condemn
who am i to refuse
the love of this powerful man...

clouds may cover the sun
darkness may fill our day
thorns may spread at night
night of heroic play.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 09 June 2009

great poem..heroic play means a lot in this poem..this is a nice one, ..keep writing, i love your works..naizz

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Kristina B; Williams 12 June 2009

this poem is exceptional.you got another fan, along with the 600 youve got already.lol..10 again

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Allan Macli Borges 13 June 2009

your words are all full of grace and true love... you`re gifted twice... having found a love like that and and the beautiful words to show this love... one ten more!

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Lovely picturesque work Grace. Love has its ups and downs but he seems perfect for you! 10 Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 14 June 2009

A wonderful flow of crisp imagery....love tests the best of us at times...but when we meet half way.....a garden of many loving colours blooms in the heart....well penned and congrats on making it into the top 500...you deserve it

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Manuel Odeny 27 August 2009

A simple journey of love, the idea of love and trusr simply written Good play of words to arose filling: 'clouds may cover the sun darkness may fill our day thorns may spread at night night of heroic play.' ++10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2009

who are you to blame me who are they to condemn who am i to refuse the love of this powerful man... magnificen inter weaving of words withpowerful imaginery thought bases onreal feeling..hats off dear....10 read mine 'blame me' real neighbour......

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rago rago 06 July 2009

it is simple and so fine and read...............let the journey reach to paradise.........

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Cristy Upshaw 22 June 2009

very elegant and beautifully written. such an endearing journey indeed.

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Ronald Doku 22 June 2009

really good. i like it alot. great.

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