lady grace

A Simple Journey

oh how sweet are the words from your lips
the words full of hope and promises
oh how sweet to hear those whispers
whispers with jokes and naughty phrase...

am i still the apple of your eyes?
the princess of your life?
am i still the goddess of love?
the only woman who owns your heart? ..

lord, bless me coz i love this man
teach me to create words of love
help me to reach his lonely heart
bring these words to fill his empty life...

who are you to blame me
who are they to condemn
who am i to refuse
the love of this powerful man...

clouds may cover the sun
darkness may fill our day
thorns may spread at night
night of heroic play.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 31, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 2, 2009

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  • Manuel OdenyManuel Odeny (8/27/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    A simple journey of love, the idea of love and trusr simply written
    Good play of words to arose filling:
    'clouds may cover the sun
    darkness may fill our day
    thorns may spread at night
    night of heroic play.'
    ++10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    who are you to blame me
    who are they to condemn
    who am i to refuse
    the love of this powerful man... magnificen inter weaving of words withpowerful imaginery thought bases onreal feeling..hats off dear....10

    read mine 'blame me' real neighbour......

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  • rago rago (7/6/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    it is simple and so fine and read...............let the journey reach to paradise.........

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  • Cristy Upshaw (6/22/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    very elegant and beautifully written. such an endearing journey indeed.

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  • Ronald Doku (6/22/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    really good. i like it alot. great.

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/19/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    a touching you have written.10 shan

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  • Nessa Nanaluvzyuh (6/18/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    you are a great poet, i hope you keep on writing
    its truly a beautiful poem. lovely, passionately sweet loved the beginning yet the end even better.

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  • Christopher Flynn (6/17/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    It has a nice flow that keeps the reader interested and longing for more.

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  • Salu Salu (6/17/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    candid speech........true feelings...magic in writing....
    wish ur journey to a wonderland of episodes.
    rgrds/salu

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (6/16/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    very nice....touching
    flowing with grace and love...
    very impressive...
    very poetic..i love the way your thoughts framed into poetry
    thanks for inviting
    10+++++++

    maia

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  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 1:01:00 AM)

    The feelings of love of a young lady portrayed in a highly adorable style. Kudos.

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  • Tega Akpoduado (6/15/2009 1:23:00 PM)

    well done you deserve10 out of 10

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  • Antonio Liao (6/14/2009 10:45:00 PM)

    word has many to say but, i am entangled in your most passionate
    poem of “a simple journey'..... I do believe even if the sky wouldn’t shine
    I do wait, even the heart breath for you...I do believe that once in a while
    i have keep your lines in my life....thanks for sharing...God bless...a 10++++

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  • Mona Martinez (6/14/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    wow. powerful words that makes the poem come to life.

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  • sky dreams (6/14/2009 7:49:00 AM)

    awesome play on words.. the last stanza really pulls the poem together. great write!

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/14/2009 7:19:00 AM)

    A wonderful flow of crisp imagery....love tests the best of us at times...but when we meet half way.....a garden of many loving colours blooms in the heart....well penned and congrats on making it into the top 500...you deserve it

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/14/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    Lovely picturesque work Grace. Love has its ups and downs but he seems perfect for you!
    10 Karin Anderson

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  • Allan Macli BorgesAllan Macli Borges (6/13/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    your words are all full of grace and true love... you`re gifted twice... having found a love like that and and the beautiful words to show this love... one ten more!

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  • Kristina B; Williams (6/12/2009 4:40:00 PM)

    this poem is exceptional.you got another fan, along with the 600 youve got already.lol..10 again

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  • Naidz Ladia (6/9/2009 6:26:00 PM)

    great poem..heroic play means a lot in this poem..this is a nice one, ..keep writing, i love your works..naizz

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