A Simple Promise Poem by lady grace

A Simple Promise

Rating: 4.7


the life of my soul is you
and the breath that i take...

as we walk the aisle of joy
cross the bridges of emptiness..

you are the man of my dreams
the man who always love me
you are the truth from heaven
wakes the sleeping 'me'..

don't ever close your eyes
while staring at the sky
might you'll miss the moonshine
as witness for our love tonight...

i love you, i love you so much
no one can take your place in my heart
have you seen the falling star?
it's an omen from heaven, sign of a good start...

feel my heart...i am yours
feel my lips...it's all yours
feel the warmth of my love
it will never break your heart..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 05 June 2009

feel my heart...i am yours feel my lips...t's all yours feel the warmth of my love it will never break your heart.. a lovely poem..melodious..rich idea and well written.. liked it.. and appreciate your way of writing and your vision.. romantic enough...10+++++++++

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Romeo Della Valle 06 June 2009

How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo

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Romeo Della Valle 06 June 2009

How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo

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Efe Benjamin 06 June 2009

Romantic, very romantic poem. i like it with my 10.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

Amazing love poem, I love the last stanza most.10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 15 January 2021

The poem is as much soothing, as reassuring!

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

don't ever close your eyes while staring at the sky might you'll miss the moonshine as witness for our love tonight... touching lines are they. a beautiful promise of love. thank you

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Antonio Liao 25 January 2010

Seems a promise of Eternity....as you hear the melodies of the mountain.... the pendulum of the clock to breath....for such love, hibernate the hearted soul of immortal journey...so sweet my dear friend... God bless....a 10 +++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

the life of my soul is you and the breath that i take... as we walk the aisle of joy cross the bridges of emptiness....what animagination and promise and surity that withyou the emptiness goes with you.. i loved the stanza and lines.....10 read mine mary to marry...anywhere....come home...home bound

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Rafique Farooqi 31 August 2009

Very soft and touching write, so beautifully written, that reader can imagine the atmosphere

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