Be Sweet Poem by Lamar Cole

Be Sweet

Rating: 5.0


She kept stepping into puddles.
And her shoes began to fret.
Her shoes told her that they were getting wet.
She told her shoes not to get upset.

That she loved the feel of her feet getting wet.
And to be sweet and not complain.
That puddles would not hurt them.
And that they were being a little vain.

Sunday, July 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini shibu 16 July 2018

To be sweet and not to complain, all expect others to be She spoiled her shoes to get good feel.. A thought provoking poem

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Irfanulla Shariff 15 July 2018

She told her shoes not to get upset….That she loved the feel of her feet getting wet…And to be sweet and not complain. A very delightful, two quatrain poem which sounds so sweet in expression. Well done, Lamar. I enjoyed reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 July 2018

Her shoes began to fret and this really amazed mind. Being sweet in life matters a lot. An amazing sharing is done really...10

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Kostas Lagos 15 July 2018

While reading your poem only one word came to my mind: Cool!

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