Be With Me Poem by Rini Shibu

Be With Me

Rating: 5.0


Stay in my eyes throughoutthe night
Never go away out of my sight
Be the hero of my dream
And be with me till we see the suns beam
Make the moment honey sweet
And every night let this repeat

Saturday, September 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susheela Shiju- 15 October 2018

nice love poem..good work

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Aqua Flower 06 October 2018

What a beatutiful write..: A honey sweet poem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 October 2018

Hi Rini, Lovely poem expressing feeling of insecurity encroaching into one’s mind, life.Very convincingly written

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Lamar Cole 29 September 2018

This is a very beautiful and very enjoyable poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2018

Being the hero of dream and reality in sweet memory he will remain with you. A brilliant dream poem is well penned...10

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