Beach Poem by Rini Shibu

Beach

Rating: 5.0


You were there
in the air
And your presence
I felt all through day
The threads of winter breeze
As touched my skin
Curled and chilled
I sewed my dreams
And i sipped love
On the tenerife beach

Saturday, November 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 03 November 2018

This is a very wonderful and enjoyable poem to read about love and the beach.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Coldness! ! Winter, Muse of the beach; Able to sip love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 03 November 2018

You bring warmth even if you write about the winter breeze. Perfect!

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2018

Fantastic poem......a perfect place to sit and enjoy the nature with your loved ones.10+++

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Susheela Shiju 03 November 2018

beautifully penned dear Rini!

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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

Love on the beach, sounds good to me. A great write.

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