~ Beau John Keats ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Ms. Nivedita

Boiledegg white face
Curly cloudy indocile hair
Deer spry eyes
Hellenic nose
Steeping neck, a
Pisa Leaning Tower
With a Ruby dot
Accentuated malars, flushing
Sliced watermelon leafy lips
Smile runnel flowething
Ivory leggy the Dame!

In the gamut of twinkly beamish
Streamlet of blue blood
Floweth up visibly
From bosom
Liquid fire
On nude neck

Many dived
In bosoms to die
To dye in blue beauty
Poison blue.

Like tempest
Boisterous Beau
Nears closes to Dame.

Flower Krishnachura
Glowing breathing
Fire flame
Singing adieu
Bon voyage to Beau?

Those blued fire
Entice, Lure
Coy Decoy Beau
Impulsively enjoy
Dying in
Steeping neck
Bohemian bosom
Fire flames burping.

Beau diffuses for
Blooming death…
Engages in Dame’s
Ruby dot draw
Lip mark slick silken.
Beau John Keats says,
‘Hey Dame enter in you
With body mind cargo
Constellate your
Geometric corpus by
Fragmented blue miniscule
With a smile face wear’.

For blue beauty poison
Helplessly yet sincerely
Dame pules mewls for
Inevitable eventually
Of Beau John Keats.

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Comments about ~ Beau John Keats ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (8/12/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    its par above! ! i really need to read a lot to even comment on this! ! Greattt! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (7/28/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    This is a great work of art Niv and a great tribute to Keats' suggested treatment for melancholy. That joy and sadness may co exist reigns true in your blue beauty poison blue. A great eye opener! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/3/2011 11:48:00 AM)

    A noble tribute to the great poet John Keats-
    Namasthea! ! ! ! !
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  • Claudia Krizay (4/28/2011 2:03:00 PM)

    Very interesting tribute to John Keats -well done. (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2010 5:38:00 AM)

    Great! Keats must be happy from the heaven! (Report) Reply

  • Eli Medina (9/7/2010 1:35:00 PM)

    its like ones reading into your own little world liked it very much! (Report) Reply

  • (7/31/2010 9:45:00 PM)

    I couldn't really understnd some of our vocabulary. I had to search up some words in my dictionary and on the computer. But overall i think i quite enjoyed your poem. Good Job! You make a fine poet! Keep on Keeping on!
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  • (7/31/2010 6:33:00 PM)

    Many American women could not understand the enormous sexual awareness that you possess. It comes, I would presume, from the repressed nature of your culture's social mores, which heightens both physical and spiritual awareness and response. Though you struggle with English words and syntax, your inner emotion commands the words you choose to relate this awareness and physicality. Very interesting. -Cat (Report) Reply

  • (7/31/2010 5:30:00 AM)

    Good one... Good job (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2010 11:14:00 PM)

    this poem gives off the essence that is came strait from your heart. I like it because it makes you think and wonder and it sparks the imagination and i love the imagery. I also like your reference to a blue beauty poison... (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2010 6:01:00 AM)

    i will be frank, i cannot appreciate the poem fully coz i didn't understand it. maybe if you could some sort or background or context, that could help. but i think i felt the mood, very captivating, even though i didn't understand it i was able to read it to the end because of that powerful thing you do to keep the reader glued. butalso lots of colourful diction, lovely (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2010 2:57:00 PM)

    This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2010 6:09:00 PM)

    That poem is very interesting. (Report) Reply

  • (6/11/2010 8:46:00 PM)

    Hi Niv: Like Ramesh I would like someone to explain this poem line by line, then at that point I just might understand what the heck you're talking about. Sorry to be so dumbfounded, but I just don't get it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2010 9:41:00 PM)

    Hi Nivedita.... Read your poem. I think I will understand your poems by and by. To me this poem was a punch in the face. I will read your other poems and see whether I can relate to them.Thanks for your comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2010 10:23:00 AM)

    I'm sorry, being one of the older set, I don; t understand.You write for the young. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (4/28/2010 3:43:00 PM)

    psychadelelic...kliedoscopic... beutiful.....
    well done

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  • (4/15/2010 5:00:00 PM)

    Striking images...brilliant flames flood the page. Great job Niv a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2010 8:05:00 AM)

    awesome descriptive imagery, an amazing read (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2010 11:34:00 AM)

    indeed a good poem
    written with rich imaginery
    indeed in niveditasque style...........
    a good write.......
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010

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