~ Beau John Keats ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
~ Beau John Keats ~
~ BEAU JOHN KEATS ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
11.12.09.
Boiledegg white face
Curly cloudy indocile hair
Deer spry eyes
Hellenic nose
Steeping neck, a
Pisa Leaning Tower
With a Ruby dot
Accentuated malars, flushing
Sliced watermelon leafy lips
Smile runnel flowething
Ivory leggy the Dame!
In the gamut of twinkly beamish
Streamlet of blue blood
Floweth up visibly
From bosom
Liquid fire
On nude neck
Beguiling!
Many dived
In bosoms to die
To dye in blue beauty
Poison blue.
Like tempest
Boisterous Beau
Nears closes to Dame.
Flower Krishnachura
Glowing breathing
Fire flame
Singing adieu
Bon voyage to Beau?
Those blued fire
Entice, Lure
Coy Decoy Beau
Impulsively enjoy
Dying in
Steeping neck
Bohemian bosom
Fire flames burping.
Beau diffuses for
Blooming death…
Engages in Dame’s
Ruby dot draw
Lip mark slick silken.
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Beau John Keats says,
‘Hey Dame enter in you
With body mind cargo
Constellate your
Geometric corpus by
Fragmented blue miniscule
With a smile face wear’.
For blue beauty poison
Helplessly yet sincerely
Dame pules mewls for
Inevitable eventually
Of Beau John Keats.
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Hi Niv: Like Ramesh I would like someone to explain this poem line by line, then at that point I just might understand what the heck you're talking about. Sorry to be so dumbfounded, but I just don't get it.
This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work!
i will be frank, i cannot appreciate the poem fully coz i didn't understand it. maybe if you could some sort or background or context, that could help. but i think i felt the mood, very captivating, even though i didn't understand it i was able to read it to the end because of that powerful thing you do to keep the reader glued. butalso lots of colourful diction, lovely
its par above! ! i really need to read a lot to even comment on this! ! Greattt! ! ! !
This is a great work of art Niv and a great tribute to Keats' suggested treatment for melancholy. That joy and sadness may co exist reigns true in your blue beauty poison blue. A great eye opener!
A noble tribute to the great poet John Keats- Namasthea! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 8:36:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi Nivedita.... Read your poem. I think I will understand your poems by and by. To me this poem was a punch in the face. I will read your other poems and see whether I can relate to them.Thanks for your comment on my poem.