Beauty Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Many a rainbow appears
and disappears in the sky
Flowers abundant bloom
and wither in the garden

Sweet dreams can't cross
water lines of sleep's ocean
Bliss can't stay ceaseless,
Beauty on earth is ephemeral

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beauty is ephemeral on the earth. No need to mourn the lost ones
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 March 2022

just a suggestion: 'Many rainbows appear and disappear' Or 'Many a rainbow appears and disappears' bri : )

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Yes dear Bri, you are grammatically correct. But sometimes our enthusiasm surpasses the gramsTidal stringecies

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2022

'Sweet dreams cannot cross water lines of sleep's ocean', beautiful line from a wonderful poem. Revisiting this great poem full of compelling images.

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Thanks a lot dear RMJ, ephimerality of earthly beauty hurts me

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Indira Renganathan 26 March 2022

An intelligent write on our transient life.....interesting 5*****

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Thank you very much my neighbor poetess

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2022

A thought provoking poem well expressed and crafted. Everything on earth is ephemeral like life itself. Yet, the happiness we derive from the beauty and wonders of existence will create memories that will last forever. A beautiful poem with great images.

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Thank you very much dear RMJ. I am very very happy that you have made your appearance after an eclipse of a short while.i was thinking of sending you a message.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

May I invite you to read my new poem "New Moon ", dedicated to you sir.

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