Bird Of Pain Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Bird Of Pain

Rating: 3.0


The bird hitherto being fed pain alone
Is struggling to escape from its cage
To wilderness where rays of darkness
Fall not or the light of love cease to glow
Every moment before you is blissful
Deep from the bottom of your eyes
I see the beams of love sparkling
Evicting from its chambers dark pain

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To be with somebody loving is blissful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 December 2020

May the bird be released from pain and fly into the freedom of blue skies, full of love and bliss. A fine poem that reaches out into the sparkling beams of love........5 stars

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Thank you very much dear poetess for such a beautiful comment. The bird of pain take refuge in the vastness of a loving eye

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Kostas Lagos 08 December 2020

Such a well crafted poem! Excellent

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Thank you very much dear Kostas Lagos for the glittering comments

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M Asim Nehal 07 December 2020

A painful truth of love nicely expressed. Liked the flow.5****

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Thank you dear Asim Nehal. We subside our pain with the warmth of love

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 December 2020

A profound introspective write revolving emotions and their effects. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much Ratnakar Mandlik, when the inner emotions go hurt a ray of love falls there without being the source unidentified. It is Godly

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