We’re sauntering slowly
In the exciting evening
Exchanging a mystical kiss
Soft moonlight avenue bliss;
I turn to you when the world is cruel,
And you make everything
Exhilarating and new,
You pull me through
Periods of depression
Unanswered questions,
A life bogged down
In unhappy confusion.
I can make it through
Any falling apart scene
That mysterious forces
Have scripted for me,
I can shake off emotional debris
That crumbling walls of loneliness
Have left on me
Because you have given me love
That survives and thrives
In the midst of every despairing sadness.
A good poem, Uriah. Love can and often is the only thing that can sustain us through the stuff life throws our way. Well done. All the best, Hugh
Yes, love is the ultimate gift. Because love never fails.It gives us light for the darkest day.Fine poem. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler
I like this joyful/romantic/optimistic style you have given into your poems. love is all it takes to make a depressing day gain a meaning. well done :) HBH
i'm practically crying, it's so sweet. i have lived that feeling countless times, and there is nothing better than it. my fav's list is screaming for its soul (in a good way) eni da kid
Epic. This just says it all. Those of us who have experienced the real joy and comfort of absolute love will relate one hundred per cent to what you write so masterfully. Those of us who have lost it will relate one hundred and one per cent.... this is one I will read time and time again. Thank you. t x
Lovely. Another Uriah Hamilton masterpiece. Well done. Shannon P.S. Don't you ever write anything that's just mediocre? lol
I'm not a big fan of how this one flows..but i think the message is beautiful and sincere..I admire you Uriah.
I do like the phrase 'what mysterious forces/ have scripted for me.... ' as if you are sent through life by the forces and guided by your love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the words so lovely and profound that moment when the heart has finally found redemption even if seemingly this tumbling world has caught the soul up in its confusion not so! the words here crystal clear like stars brought into the heart burning with the pure light of love a great uplifting poem the reader just happy to read the glorious words Thank you for giving this to those swallowed up in dim dark caves