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Becoming

Rating: 5.0

The purplish crimson sun's now arising,
And buds are waiting on yellow rosebush.
Yesterday lessons for today are guiding,
As birds take violet skies of dawn hush.
The youth grew so quickly, time's ambush!

Becoming
Saturday, July 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: color,growth,rose,youth,birds,sunrise,quintain (english)
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Photograph courtesy of Aruggieri from Pixabay
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Varsha M 24 July 2021

Full of positivity and life. Inspiring.

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Varsha M 24 July 2021

Very true words. How youth comes and goes no one knows. But nature has its own plans.

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A beautiful poem of life. growth, colour and progress. Captivating quintain.

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A lovely poem of great insight.

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Time has its own course and as we dance with the flow of time there is an accompanying change in life.....n

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2021

Excellent 5-liner! . Cute colours graphic chosen, the colours of The Dutch Royal House

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2021

Beautiful poem, loveliest rhymes and so enchanting to read, cutest colour, sweet graphic,5 Stars full on Top, dear poetess! added

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