Becoming 2023 Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Becoming 2023

Rating: 4.8

Will there be a sun
That truly shine through
The grey clouds
Burning them until the sky is blue
There have been dark clouds above
And the deary days of December
Has made me melancholy
However, it will be January soon
And I hope the sun will arrive then
It doesn't matter neither way
For just on the horizon, a new year
And I want to continue
Spending time with you

Wednesday, March 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
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M. Asim Nehal 24 March 2023

Another wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 23 March 2023

New year brings a lot of hopes. We kinda wish that things would change for the better. They might not change but there's nothing wrong in hoping. And maybe if we change, the world will look new and different as well. Beautiful and natural!

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Teresa Seed 23 March 2023

Beautiful, thank you for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2023

A beautiful poem dear LeeAnn.....Top marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2023

The sun can always assert its way through the dark clouds to give its light to humanity. A very inspiring poem beautifully expressed.Thank you for sharing, LeeAnn.

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5) and Congratulations, LeeAnn. This poem ranks #57 in the list of best poems of members. May it rise to the top

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4) the warmer Jan, the hopeful new year days.., everything melts down into the much-anticipated company of "you". Very nice.5* and MyFavourites..

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3) " It doesn't matter neither way "… the double negative in the line accentuates eagerness of the poet to escape the cold depressive days of December and to welcome the warmer January. That is really poetic.

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2) " the dreary days of December…made me melancholy.." but the warmer days of January with a New Year Promise are close by..

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Beautiful. "..a sun..that shine through.. the grey clouds.... burning them until the sky is blue".. exquisite, LeeAnn...

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