Before The Fall (Haiku No.5) Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Before The Fall (Haiku No.5)

Rating: 5.0


greenest leaf now gold
clinging for one day longer
my heart still attached

Monday, December 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fall,seasons
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I understand, technically not a haiku. Or a senryu. Technically.
(Certainly not a sonnet)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 26 December 2016

A beautiful haiku, full of meaning. That's fine poetry, deserving no less than 10.

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Kim Barney 12 December 2016

Very nice. I really like this. Keep posting!

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