Before You. Poem by Fay Slimm
Before You.
Were there ever lovely skies, red-streaked with dawn?
Were vibrating colours so exciting?
And were green new-budded leaves adorning
Branching trees so soft and tightly furled? Might
I have missed these wonders before you, or
Were they not there? Please tell me, prior to you
Was fire as bright, flaming me toward more
Tender heat to thaw my heart.? Raindrops too
As glittery? And did people wear such
Friendly smiles? I remember no renewed
Mind then. Flowering now perhaps overmuch,
I still prefer this happy, lasting mood
Which electrifies my day. Pleasuring
You is proving such a priceless treasure.
This poem reflects an inspired, cultured style; there are romantic themes, however now I should suggest quiet, moderation: this poem deserves ten any way.
Very insightful write Fay, being in love makes us look at things in a different way, 10 Lynda xx
Beautiful poem Fay eloquence at its best enjoyed it so Chris 10++++
I think you described love so well here fay... Andy 10
An incredable write Fay! where were you when i was seventeen! a beautiful poem Fay! regards Bob
You play the passion of one 'in love' with fistfuls of arpeggios in this highly romantic write. Actually it reminds me of that beautiful old standard from 'The Music Man': 'There was love all around But I never heard it singing No, I never heard it at all Till there was you' Your final line is particularly pleasing. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
short and sweet. very sweet. your writing flows realy good.
mine eyes are green with envy....how I wish I could see as you now do :) .....this is just simply lovely to read Fay
Very lovely poems... And you the fine Fairy be deserved ten fine smiles.. Tsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:38:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
great poem with great imagery, a delight to read :)