Being In Love Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Being In Love

Rating: 5.0


A tiny teen heart
Longing to live
In someone's heart
Nameless now for them
And planted deep within her.

In her heart of hearts
She pumps blood of warmth.

In her valley of the soul,
Nests the bird of her desire.

Life at present, in and around,
Offers sensations, wild and new,
Veils her secrets, delicate and fresh
Entangles and evacuates emotions few.

Womanliness in her, dawns slow
Invisible though, culminates low
Timely emotions flood that valley,
Hours of waiting at worlds ugly.

Silver moon of moonlit sky,
Anchors the night less dreams high
Nights of endless waiting for him,
Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm
Ever she wanted a divine hug
Timeless, Endless, embracing fog.

Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song,love and friendship,teen,timeless,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

Great poem on eternal love. Thank you poet for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Great poem sir. Thanks. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Sabita for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

Silver moon of moonlit sky, Anchors the night less dreams high Nights of endless waiting for him, Kindle the desire, yet keep her calm Ever she wanted a divine hug Timeless, Endless, embracing fog. This stanza has been superb. It initiates with a name Sanket.. Wow. Thanks for the lovely line hidden in the poem, I understood it. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Priyanka for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Anamika Raj 27 August 2017

Well penned the feelings of a teen. Well done. Salute.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Anamika for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding.

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Chinedu Dike 03 February 2017

Lovely and very profound. I like the articulation and clarity of your poems. Kudos! And do remain blessed.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 February 2018

Thanks my dear Sir for these nice words of encouragement. Sorry for being so late in responding. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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