Beloved Presence Poem by Sandra Feldman

Beloved Presence

Rating: 4.5


Like the air that circles by,
For without it we shall die,
Your beloved presence, here,
Indispensable, my Dear,
When I know that you're not near,
Black, dark Shadows break all Light,
Life becomes a useless sight,
In the sadness of the night.

Without you, there is no me,
Being has just stopped to be,
Oneness is so obsolete,
Two hearts should as one now beat,
Only Love can Life complete.

Sunday, August 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2014

Oneness is so obsolete, Two hearts should as one now beat, Only Love can Life complete. - Sigh!

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Eugene Levich 18 August 2014

Beautiful lines; touching memories. Is it time for a published anthology of Sandracita's 100 best poems?

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Bill Cantrell 17 August 2014

Dark shadows break all light, a lovely poem of the lasting face of love, once beheld, it ever stays in the heart. Another really good poem.

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