Betrayal Poem by dimitrios galanis
Betrayal
Once, thorns
pierced his heel.
Οn their affliction
stumbles, daily.
The memories of a cruel betrayal can be like a thorn in the flesh.....! They keep hurting, giving us lots of pain! If the betrayal is from a close one, the pain will be more intense! Brief and beautiful...!
A succinct gem of a piece. Betrayal is indeed a thorn that never leaves you alone. It keeps stinging n poking you. A great depiction of pain that betrayal gives. A10.
Thank you Nosheen.Pleased that you liked it. .Is pierced the right word here or should stinged, poked be better?
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11/8/2024 8:54:08 PM # 1.0.0
Brilliant! The pain of betrayal is like a permanent thorn that makes us stumble in our relationships in our life.
Thank you Hazel.Glad you liked it.