Betrayal Poem by dimitrios galanis


Rating: 5.0

Once, thorns
pierced his heel.
Οn their affliction
stumbles, daily.

Wednesday, March 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,victim
Hazel Durham 20 March 2017

Brilliant! The pain of betrayal is like a permanent thorn that makes us stumble in our relationships in our life.

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 March 2017

Thank you Hazel.Glad you liked it.

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Valsa George 09 March 2017

The memories of a cruel betrayal can be like a thorn in the flesh.....! They keep hurting, giving us lots of pain! If the betrayal is from a close one, the pain will be more intense! Brief and beautiful...!

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 March 2017

Thank you, dear Lady, for the generous word.

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Nosheen Irfan 09 March 2017

A succinct gem of a piece. Betrayal is indeed a thorn that never leaves you alone. It keeps stinging n poking you. A great depiction of pain that betrayal gives. A10.

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Dimitrios Galanis 09 March 2017

Thank you Nosheen.Pleased that you liked it. .Is pierced the right word here or should stinged, poked be better?

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