Οn Excitment's Fervour Poem by dimitrios galanis

Οn Excitment's Fervour

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At an autumn's cold evening

as the wave was popping into shore

I got the impression it was sweeping away

the leaves of memory's tissues

where in summer we had written

love promises οn excitment's fervour.

Οn Excitment's Fervour
This is a translation of the poem Εν Θερμώ by dimitrios galanis
Sunday, January 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A translation of a poem of mine written in greek.//31.1.2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 05 April 2016

The initial frenzy of love slowly waning with the passage of time...how wonderfully you have put it. Using the Nature imagery, you have described your feelings in a great way. A wave sweeping away the leaves of memory...loved this image. Great work.

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Savita Tyagi 11 February 2016

Beautiful and romantic! Waves may sweep the fervor and excitement of love but memory of it keeps coming back to touch the shore for what was once there, till we realize that even the memory of it is chipped away with time.

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 February 2016

Memories pushed back into oblivion sometimes is a whole hoard ''At lucky to grasp''.Do, please, read this exactly one to see how much attention do we elders must pay to those memories.Thank you for the kindness to comment it.

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Hazel Durham 07 February 2016

Love sometimes only has a season, a time and place where two hearts unite, the Autumn chill is a reminder of what could have been! Superb write!

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 February 2016

Hazel, if you have not, do please read the ''At lucky to grasp''

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 February 2016

Thank you, dear Hazel.Climate and seasons play, indeed, a great role in feelings.That is what i wanted to show.

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

Waves come and sweep away all that the lovers wrote on the sea strand in the height of their love! Great lines!

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 February 2016

For your kind word, thank you, dear Lady.

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Sofia Kioroglou 01 February 2016

So beautiful! A lovely poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 01 February 2016

An aspect of life so common.Thank you, Sofia.

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