dimitrios galanis
Patero Epirus Hellada [ Greece]
Οn Excitment's Fervour
Rating: ★5.0
At an autumn's cold evening
as the wave was popping into shore
I got the impression it was sweeping away
the leaves of memory's tissues
where in summer we had written
love promises οn excitment's fervour.
as the wave was popping into shore
I got the impression it was sweeping away
the leaves of memory's tissues
where in summer we had written
love promises οn excitment's fervour.
This is a translation of the poem Εν Θερμώ by dimitrios galanis
Sunday, January 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A translation of a poem of mine written in greek.//31.1.2016
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COMMENTS
Nosheen Irfan
05 April 2016
The initial frenzy of love slowly waning with the passage of time...how wonderfully you have put it. Using the Nature imagery, you have described your feelings in a great way. A wave sweeping away the leaves of memory...loved this image. Great work.
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Savita Tyagi
11 February 2016
Beautiful and romantic! Waves may sweep the fervor and excitement of love but memory of it keeps coming back to touch the shore for what was once there, till we realize that even the memory of it is chipped away with time.
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Dimitrios Galanis
12 February 2016
Memories pushed back into oblivion sometimes is a whole hoard ''At lucky to grasp''.Do, please, read this exactly one to see how much attention do we elders must pay to those memories.Thank you for the kindness to comment it.
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Hazel Durham
07 February 2016
Love sometimes only has a season, a time and place where two hearts unite, the Autumn chill is a reminder of what could have been!
Superb write!
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Dimitrios Galanis
07 February 2016
Thank you, dear Hazel.Climate and seasons play, indeed, a great role in feelings.That is what i wanted to show.
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Dimitrios Galanis
12 February 2016
Hazel, if you have not, do please read the ''At lucky to grasp''
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Valsa George
04 February 2016
Waves come and sweep away all that the lovers wrote on the sea strand in the height of their love! Great lines!
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Kelly Kurt
31 January 2016
Promises made in excitement can be mourned when months later they are noticed to be yet fulfilled
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Dimitrios Galanis
31 January 2016
There is nothing to escape your kind eye.Thank you, dear Kelly.
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Mihaela Pirjol
31 January 2016
A poem of reminiscing and nostalgia...a gentle expression of love and tenderness.
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