Crimson Love

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Betrayal Of Love - Poem by Crimson Love

My first taste of betrayal,
was one to not be forgotten,
Betrayed by the one whom was the one I could confide,
Ripping at the sewn bits of my heart....
She betrayed me......
My lover.....my friend,
the one whom held my love,

Caught upon a bed of deciet she lie there with someone,
whom wasn't me,
My eyes fill with sadnees, a look of regret,
she stares back into my eyes, apoligetic...distraught,
How can this happen, when I've given everything,
Tears trickle down my crimson face,

I wasn't good enough, I've been replaced,
She held my heart, and had a choice,
The lust of another or the everything I have,
she chose wrong,
now....I'm gone.


Comments about Betrayal Of Love by Crimson Love

  • (12/11/2018 4:31:00 AM)

    A sad, honest poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Thoughts Of A Poet (10/19/2012 5:45:00 PM)

    this one is a good one and why don't you write poetry any-more you were so good at it (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2011 8:14:00 PM)

    This poem is a real tearjerker. I could feel my heart breaking along with yours, I so long to ease your pain. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/11/2011 5:32:00 PM)

    Aw, mon amour. What a heart breaking poem. The strikes our loved ones try to burst our hearts with, always leave the worst scars. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 12, 2011


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