Crimson Love

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A Distant Love - Poem by Crimson Love

I'm the angel sent to protect you.
Watching your life through closed eyes,
I watch and observe.
Such a delicate creature of beauty,
My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing,
Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity,
My heart's exploding with the thought of you,
So painful; love hurts,
Watching my hidden desire from a far,
Never together only distanced by love.

Comments about A Distant Love by Crimson Love

  • Daniel Brick (1/4/2017 2:53:00 AM)

    An angel sent to protect falls in love. What a complication! But that's what love is - a complication - perhaps sexual expression is a simplication, a reductionof that complication to a point of satisfaction. But in this case that is not possible so the heart and mind are in acute conflict. The mind must agree with the heart eventually or vice versa
    but the heightened existence this leadsd to is stunning. Loin d'amour is the titlem, of an opera the MET presented thismseason, in other words Love from Afar. Your poem exactly!
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  • (9/30/2016 3:42:00 PM)

    Saul AnHeart
    Eternity is nye, neither here nor there, ours eyes defy what once was there.
    Longing is sweet, seperation makes and breaks
    Time is our enemy, and with your life as meaning
    That kind of true love is simply demeaning
    Fuck yeh, good luck to ya
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (3/13/2016 2:51:00 PM)

    My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing,
    Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity,
    My heart's exploding with the thought of you, love hurts. we all go through such experiences which make us all mature. thank you. tony
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  • (6/30/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    Love is a beautiful thing my friend...... Good one there (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    such an adorable !! (Report) Reply

  • Ovi Hale (7/18/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    Passionate, true and plainly wondrous writing.
    It's a fine piece of art.
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  • (11/11/2011 5:53:00 AM)

    Crim, you wana bring tears to other children's eyes? ..this is a great piece of art my fellow poet and many of us can relate to it....WOW! (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2011 9:12:00 PM)

    hehehe I love Alex Manson! =) (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2011 6:56:00 PM)

    i love this, crim! yeah, that's your new nickname...'crim'. :) no but seriously, i'm very inspired by this, it's beautiful, just like you, except you're just plain gorgeous.... XD (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2011 12:47:00 PM)

    God has His ways of testing love by keeping two apart, making it divine with distance bringing them together in heaven. Simply loved reading. (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2011 8:02:00 PM)

    This must be a very difficult thing for you, to love but for it to be almost impossible for the two of you to be together. I've been through something similar, wondrous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Dianna Renate Evans (10/14/2011 1:09:00 PM)

    I love the poem that is how i feel about my past ex so I love it! ! (Report) Reply

  • (9/28/2011 6:35:00 AM)

    To love but not to have. A cruel thing that many have to experience. A wonderful poem to share, thank you. :) (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2011 4:45:00 PM)

    It is hard, to love but not touch, to want but not have. Beautiful writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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