Better Chores For Better Shores Poem by Susan Lacovara

Better Chores For Better Shores

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I'd feel better about blistered hands
If in fact their work be useful
And with lasting lush result
Not that the garbage men be slighted
For their lifting of our overconsumption
But better if raised consciousness
To recycle
Lending better breath to a gasping Earth

I'd feel better about blistered hands
If not from prying tenement doors ajar
But wrestling trigger happy fingers
From pointed anger
That paint and poetry could survive
The onslaught of embedding violence
And graffiti cement be polished
To depict hands outstretched

I'd feel better about blistered hands
If sore, from stringing mosquito netting
Planting saplings or serving clean water
To those whose hands tire from trying
To believe we work for better days
Better chores For better shores

Friday, March 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(03/14/14) Simple tasks can change the world...am I the only to believe? Make a difference, small as it may seem...it will present a return. Earth Day, April 22nd...why not start today...great the growth from one loving seed planted. Do take part, in help, with heart! Ever the rose-colored-glasses-wearing optimist, but I enjoy the view.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 March 2014

Blistered hands are to be looked upon with pride if they are used for giving a face lift to the disfigured and ruined Earth by clearing the heap of garbage or planting trees and making it verdant and clean! Simple acts of love and concern can make a vital difference.... Enjoyed this fine write! !

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Anthony Burkett 16 March 2014

The first few lines of this pen brought to mind a Dennis The Menace cartoon from long... LONG ago! :) lol! ! He proudly announced to his parents (his mom I think) that he wanted to be a garbage man when he became a grown-up... when (she) asked why, his response was Then no one will care how I smell... if only the world could be that accepting... just a thought... :)

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