A Snowflake In The Sun Poem by Susan Lacovara

A Snowflake In The Sun

Rating: 4.9


You could not have been any prettier
than a snowflake in the sun
How your silver frosted glistening glint,
So caught my eye, then melted, done..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(10/18/13) Remembering how he looked, when my heart first fell.. winter's nomad...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phineas Poe 17 October 2013

Short and very sweet, I like it,

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Liliana ~el 18 October 2013

Wow, also short and sweet :) Just like nothing gold stays (Robert Frost :) Deep attraction disappears like those who seem with exceptional qualities seem unreal

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 October 2013

hold it, those words, for my hearts in them do melt!

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2013

A complete poem. A touchy note. 10/10.

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C. P. Sharma 20 October 2013

Short but shining.is the snow flake game.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

......So caught my eye, then melted, done....// beautiful expression

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 May 2018

Sweet short piece.

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T.Rajesh 21 November 2017

The remembrance is green and shall always remain to. Loved it.

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Tom Allport 11 May 2017

a lovely poem of how one frosted look melted to your appeal? ..............well penned

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2017

Then melted! Thanks for sharing.

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