Between 2 Lines

Lies life or death
between 2 lines
enable grief or happiness
between 2 lines
is where i take my last breath
between 2 lines
I was at my peak
between 2 lines
I was strong
Between 2 lines
I became weak
Between 2 lines
My blood rained from my flesh
Between 2 lines
I felt pain
Between 2 lines
I thought i was through
Between 2 lines
All I needed was you

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laila lili 12 January 2009

Wow your poems are beautiful with the simply and the honestly feeling i like it to mush between to lines lol Laila lili

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Annie Girl 19 November 2008

awsome it all goes either way love it

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Simply I 06 November 2008

I think it is truly a gift to write something and make someone else feel the emotion you wanted to or maybe one even deeper than you were at the time. I love it.

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Life is full of paradoxes and the law of opposites always rules.Good comparision.

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Chamekka Jones 17 September 2009

WONDERFULLY WRITTEN!

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djean Whitney 15 April 2009

I now how things feel so far gon and out of rech and all you nead is somone to pul you back and say thay care and they neac you here. I love this your good -good job!

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Londiwe Buthelezi 25 March 2009

i like it...=) .it's really nice

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samar Halabi 26 January 2009

there is no doubt that this poem is so lovely........ Thanks...Diana

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fat-a- fat 14 January 2009

sWeeT......+10 i likey

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