Like a traveller
Unable to cross the
Vast ocean beyond
I tend to be silent
Confused and tempted
To put a signature
In your heart
But I couldn't my joy,
I am in the sand
To be washed away
By your waves.
Love Stopped Like Small Waves Fading your love is stopped like small waves fading on the sandy shore unable to cross a vast ocean without a ship silent confused tempted now is not time of crossing wave tide washes sand out under feet Inspired by the poem 'Beyond Horizons' by the poet Suresh Kumar EK. Dedicated to the poet Suresh Kumar EK.by Suresh Kumar EK.
A distinct ending that revolts against dependence, weakness and despair, aesthetic and imaginative portrayal that gives the poetic image more strength, well done for this wonderful work
Great expression. Admired your last three lines. An adorable poem...5 stars.
I tend to be silent Confused and tempted To put a signature In your heart. to be washed away in romance and real and true love. my heart's desire. tony
Beautiful poem pregnant with deep thoughts. The doubt and feelings of inability that we feel when many a deep oceans are there to be crossed is expressed so poetically. Thank you for sharing the poem and thank you so much for your comment on my poem.
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your love is stopped like small waves fading at the sandy shore, unable to cross a vast ocean without a ship silent confused tempted, now is not the time of crossing wave tide washes sand out under feet