Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

Beyond The Reach! - Poem by Subbaraman N V

Who has placed the moon
Beyond the reach of common man?
Who has made the ocean deep
Beyond the reach of man with ease?
Who has made the waves so much
Beyond the count of human touch?
Who has made the sun so bright
Beyond the reach of human sight?
Who has made the earth move round
Beyond the power of man so sound?
Who has made this world so nice
Beyond our power to do likewise?

All is made by the Power Supreme
God the Omnipotent to the extreme!
Love and laws He provides the best
For all the humans to follow with zest
Make the world a heaven of peace
Where all the negatives surely cease!


Comments about Beyond The Reach! by Subbaraman N V

  • Gita Ashok (6/25/2010 3:00:00 AM)

    All is made by the Power Supreme
    God the Omnipotent to the extreme!
    Love and laws He provides the best
    For all the humans to follow with zest
    Make the world a heaven of peace
    Where all the negatives surely cease!

    Absolutely! This is an excellent composition where you have glorified our Eternal Creator!
    I rate it 10++++++.........
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/11/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    If it was not HIM, we could have dumped everybody in sea...... great 10 (Report)Reply

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  • David Threadgold (7/6/2008 9:44:00 AM)

    a pleasure to read and in rhyme with a strong message. *10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/30/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    a poem meaningful you read...
    some fresh air you breathe...
    wonderful devotion towards
    the great great grand father rich!
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  • (4/20/2008 3:01:00 AM)

    I enjoy the fact that you write with rhymes.

    GW62
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  • Zubyre Parvez (12/12/2007 6:41:00 AM)

    You write from the fullness of your heart and its pure in its simplicity. Its good to see a mathematician with a good heart also lol..heart and head, a great balance. (Report)Reply

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  • Melvin Banggollay (9/11/2007 7:34:00 PM)

    Very nice poem with a deepness dispersing one's unfaithfulness to the Supreme Power of Earth and Heaven's Master. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 6, 2011


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