Beyound The Self Poem by Konab Ghazanfar

Beyound The Self

Rating: 4.8


I Quest For Safety, I Buried My Wishes,
I'm Fighting Above All The Fears.


I Couldn't Utter, I Haven't My Secrets,
My Objects Shouted Beyond My Hearing.


My Vision, My Life, My Thoughts,
I Alone Stood Beyond My Desires.


I Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside,
I Submerge Thoughts Beyond My Shores.

Beyound The Self
Monday, March 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,fight,secrets,thoughts,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 March 2019

Write comment. Very impressive expression of unfulfilled desires, Dear Konab. There is something pure which could not be explained in words. Read my ars poetica named, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks.

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Noreen KHAN 12 March 2019

Pure words wd pure thoughts. beautiful penned it.

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Huma Mir 12 March 2019

In the moments when desire fills you up with joy and takes one to a dream like world. Those moments are precious. So artistically expressed in this poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2019

Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, I Submerge Thoughts Beyond My Shores. philosophical and spiritual. i was sensing your great need to go beyond what i earthly. thanku. dear poetess. tony

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Konab Ghumman 15 March 2019

thank you so much friend. be happy.be blessed.

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Nadeem Ishaque 13 March 2019

The second line of each couplet is very powerful, poetically expressive and builds to a climax. You have sustained this in each of the four couplets. Please keep writing. A line such as submerge thoughts beyond my shores could very well have been from a very well known poet.

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Konab Ghumman 15 March 2019

thank you so much for detail analysis...

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Konab Ghumman 15 March 2019

stay blessed. keep reading..

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Amusing poem,10+++++++++ I Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, To Submerge with thoughts Beyond the Shores.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 March 2019

Profound piece of poetry. Impressive style of writing.

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