If it's Allowed
In Bright Stars,
Without Seeing Time,
I Want To See,
ADream OfSeven Colours,
Without Blinking Eyes,
To Hold Your Hand,
A Promise,
That Never Changes Its Shade,
Though Time Will Pass,
It Will Remain In Minds,
And Shine In Eyes.
From Heaven To Earth,
In Secret Of Stars,
That's What I Would Keep Along,
A Moment I Won't Let It Go,
Is The Moment Of Love.
wow.dream of seven colors... how thoughtful - - -beautifully describe element of nature.
Great imageries and fantastic flow, I liked it. nothing less than 10+++
Dear Poetess! You have captured an animated image of love wonderfully. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.
From Heaven To Earth, In Secret Of Stars, That's What I Would Keep Along, A Moment I Won't Let It Go, Is The Moment Of Love......./// superb expression
From white light of love diverge the seven colours of life and then converge back in the white light again. a beautiful poem.
A wonderful poem.Without Blinking Eyes, To Hold Your Hand, A Promise, That Never Changes Its Shade, Though Time Will Pass, It Will Remain In Minds, And Shine In Eyes.
nice to see you here all friends. hope you all are fine.thanks for your views be blessed.
There is some nice poetic expression here such as dreaming in seven colors without seeing time and without blinking an eye. Well captured eternal essence of the moment of true love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A Promise, That Never Changes Its Shade, Though Time Will Pass, It Will Remain In Minds, And Shine In Eyes. wow great dream