Big Fish Small Pond Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Big Fish Small Pond

Rating: 5.0


TAILS - FINS - BIG SPLASH! ! ! !

Got to move fast.

No way out.

Whale's water spout.

Eyes bulging big.

No place to sing.

More moving about.

TAILS - FINS - DO ROUT.

6/14/2012 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lulu Mero 12 September 2012

Ooo No! ! ! the fish needs a big pond now was this a metaphorical poem, like i feel like you are trying to tell us something else, but very creative of u. i love fish *wink*

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Pheko Motaung 20 June 2012

A fabulous write! Beautiful poem! Well done.JESUS SAVES! Thank you

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 June 2012

It can still survive, until next rain.. but it is a whale in a fresh water pond! !

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