Birds Sky

Rating: 5.0
Green, yellow, blue with red.
Tiny little bird, by my bed.
Yell, talk, peep and flirt.
Over the place of my birth.

Blue sky, puffy Grey clouds.
Shadows fall into the shroud.
You are free, open wide sky.
Worms and bugs, fill their eyes.

copyright 2004 POEWHIT

Monday, November 10, 2008
Gillena Cox 13 February 2010
i love to watch birds, i love their whistles, chirps, tweets: i enjoyed your birds eye view of sustenance and environment
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Jim Valero 04 April 2009
Like bird, like poem-beautiful and small! By the creation is known the Creator! Thanks for sharing!
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So free is the rhythm of this poem....ah!
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Costa Anakiev 22 January 2009
now i see why you asked me about birds in my home as only a real bird lover could write such a woderful work!
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Tsira Goge 04 December 2008
You took good a rhythm and rhymes beautiful... Very lovely, Joe, 10........ Sincerely, Tsira
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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008
loved the colors and the sounds.....................good write...
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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2008
Musical for perhaps older category too..nice10
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Anjali Sinha 21 November 2008
sing song -sing song, -- blue sky --fill their eyes---a melodious one ---smoothly flowing beautiful. regards anjali
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its melodious....there is sweet muzik playing through ur wrdz...beautiful write
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A little poem but a lot is said. I like the rhyme and the picture it paints. Thank you Joe.
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