Brown, brownie, loving beings,
Beaming, bouncing, tiny birds,
Hiphip -hophop - household aves,
Hopping, swinging, dancing sparrows!
Quatrain - 4 lines of 4 words each
Wow reminded me my childhood days. I don't see them often even at my farmhouse they are rare to be seen which were so common 2 decades back.
The compelling imagery makes me at close range with these lovely birds. A marvelous poem! ! ! Loved the picture that enhanced the beauty of this write.
A sweet poem and a lovely picture! I miss the sparrows very much.In our childhood days there were plenty of sparrows living around our house and we were listening to their constant chirping.
Woderful poem! bravo! please read and comment on my poem The Meadow. If you read it before; read once more because it is fixed Thanks
Loved the lines and the image..... As always, it's so beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I've become richer today. The birds have given me a new word- 'ave'.