Black Rose Poem by Daniel Hooks

Black Rose

Rating: 4.7


You look like a black rose
in full bloom.
Your pose and the clothes you wear
Make me stare.
I am entranced hypnotised by your glance
Your raven black hair flowing down your back
Your skin porcelain pale gleaming white
Under in the moons pale light
Your lips a black shade of night
Waiting to be kissed
(please don't resist)
I could list all the ways I love thee
and still not get close
Black rose I love you the most.

Friday, January 6, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,fantasy,gothic,hair,love,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenevieve Larcombe 27 April 2008

You're so sweet! this is so lovely of you to write! good work!

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Lorena Walker 22 June 2007

Very nice and beautiful. I will be checking back (if time permits) to read your newest poems...

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Supratim Chaliha 03 June 2007

REALLY A SWEET SMALL POEM. KEEP IT UP

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Melvina Germain 22 April 2007

Wonderful Imagry, a look into the gothic realm of darkness with much Love readiating to the one and only Black Rose, great job.-Melvina-

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BEAU GOLDEN 19 June 2006

nicely done. succinct.

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Mohammad Skati 04 February 2013

HI, DANIEL.I ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM.IT'S SWEET.THANKS.

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Amy Hang 03 June 2009

^_^ Very cute i would say... I love it...it touched me and its deep with the love passion you develop please keep this up i enjoyed this one poem and would enjoy the rest

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Christine Kerr 26 April 2009

I really enjoy the uniqueness you express, Finding a true passion in something or someone that would normally be passed up by many others. Good show

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Supratim Chaliha 25 September 2008

It is really awesome! ! ! Full of passionate emotions enough to wake the desires up inside a heart which is romantic! ! ! ! Keep it up....

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~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

Everything about this poem is stunning...well written piece straight from the heart.. beautifully composed and the delivery of this magical show of emotion is excellent. Bravo! ! ! ! best wishes Jon

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