Blaming The Moon. Poem by Fay Slimm

Blaming The Moon.

Rating: 5.0


Oh ominous moon - - pale portent of doom.
White luminous disk, suspended aloft
Thick blanket of black shot thru' with bright
Shiny catseyes of light, coating in soft
Unearthly glimmer this earthy-dark night,
Shine out your lovers' lantern-like gleaming
On harvested fields, waiting, like me- - - for
Moonstruck insanity, aided by dreaming,
Invaded my heart, broke down the door
To resistance, - - now ecstasy's hidden
In clandestine moments, - - oh wanton moon
Which with passion bewitches us - - bidden
By lunacy-love, he comes hurrying soon
To my arms yet again to set me aflame.
Oh moonbeaming night it is you I shall blame.! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tess Rockenstire 08 October 2008

what a wonderful poem with full of imagery and emotion.

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Sandra Fowler 03 October 2008

The moon paints a magical landscape and you have captured its essence perfectly. Lovely poem. Ten without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

My love with 10 for this lovely poem on moon.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 October 2008

A lovers moon Madam la luna, is a Timeless lovers tune.. Andrew 10

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Lynda Robson 01 October 2008

Great poem Fay, I love poems about the moon and this is excellent,10 Lynda xx

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2020

Ominous moon has mesmerized mind with extra-ordinary beauty. Unearthly glimmer we notice at deep night. Moon is hero of all creatures and moon sings the peace sing for all. We shall blame for moon-beaming at night with joy and reflection. This poem is outstanding poem...10

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Chuck Petz 10 November 2008

Been a long time since I read anything this romantic.Goosebumps! Chuck

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James Roberts 17 October 2008

A a real clair de lune, beautiful sensual poem,10/10

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Shimon Weinroth 12 October 2008

loonies at high tide, lovely mix of passion and compassion, reflecting reflections enchanting and urging 10 cheers Shimon

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Bob Blackwell 09 October 2008

Fay, this is truly a wonderful write, images of love under the celestial moon, how romantic, makes me wish I was back courting...walking down those quiet country lanes. Not really though when I think of all the trouble that was to come. 10/10 Bob xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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