Blazing Oceans Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Blazing Oceans



Constellations have fallen into the sea,
Swimming on the brink of every dark ocean.
Forsaken by the most beautiful stars,
Shunned by every lover of heavenly gods.

Destined to swim off the edge of this
Hideous two-dimensional realm.
Perhaps blessed in the eyes of the hurt,
A forced hand of homicidal-suicide.

Burdened to swallow salt water and spit
Out every ounce of their life blood.
Bruised and living on the filth of this water,
Drifting beyond any recognized state of sanity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

So soul feeding is what's above, great one.

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Paul Colvin 31 October 2011

A cracking wee poem and a deserved 10.

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Jacqui Broad 31 October 2011

I think I understand, but a second wave has knocked my feet from under me. I'm drowning in your words...

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Eric Cockrell 30 October 2011

passionate, edgy... your way with words is astounding!

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Dave Walker 30 October 2011

Really like it. Good write as always.

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