Bleak House Poem by jerry hughes

Bleak House



I used to pass it on my way to school,
an eerie place with a tumbled-down fence
and gates that groaned on windy days.

Around its terraces gargoyles leered
at passers-by in stoney silence.
Ivy wrapped the house in a green cocoon
and the curtains were always drawn.

A crone lived there they said - died long ago,
but I'll swear I saw her framed by a window
dressed in crinoline and lace.

A Gainsborough lady of such exquisite beauty
she took my breath away.
Such are the fantasies of an adolescent boy
on the threshold of pubescence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 10 April 2007

The master lyricist at work! Rgds, Ivan

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Alison Cassidy 09 April 2007

Love your use of Dicken's words in this lyrical and descriptive piece about your childhood. You paint your picture in rich Gainsborough colours - with an appealing shift of tonality in the last couple of lines. Excellent poem. love, Allie xxxxx

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Dan Hanosh 07 April 2007

Nicely done... The title got me, and the first line told me I wasn't mistaken. Thanks. Dan Hanosh Dreams Are Yours To Share

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Charles M Moore 07 April 2007

We all know that house, Nice one Jerry.

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