Blikvanger In De Stralen.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Blikvanger In De Stralen....

Rating: 5.0

mijn blikvanger in de stralen
wie weet hoevele manieren
ze hebben gelopen, gereisd
door de zwaarste bossen en stortbuien
om eindelijk naar je enorme poort te kunnen komen
moeten ze wachten, buiten blijven, is dat hun lot?

ik vraag het je beleefd
dit is alleen tussen jou en zij
die blikvanger is helemaal van mij,
de ogen hebben de jouwe gevolgd
maar de zaak is nog steeds tussen jou en haar persoon
ik ben gewoon
de derde persoon
in enkelvoud die je nooit zult zien

je voeten moeten vermoeid zijn geworden, toch?
en het beton heet en dus droog….

©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Saturday the 27th of October 2018 -
@ 11.59 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
Herfst met mooie zonnestralen, daarom dit gedicht.

Saturday, October 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,fate,life,october,poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This morn it was severely cold, but after a couple of hours,
the weather turned out to be warm because the sun rays have come
and the air gets much much warmer.

That's why I wrote this poem, about those moments.
Thank you so much for reading and a bit comment.
Sincerely,

©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Saturday the 27th of October 2018 -
@ 11.59 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
Herfst met mooie zonnestralen, daarom dit gedicht.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

Through the heaviest forest and through the downpours you have reached up to the enormous gate. Your eye-catcher in the rays knows about many many ways. This is wonderful. Concrete is dry but eye-catcher has taught imagery of autumn and felt the fate of life. The third person is never seen but she watches everything. A brilliant poem is well penned...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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