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Blind Luck

Rating: 5.0
Don't waste your money! Don't throw it all away!
Or gamble with mistress chance, on some unlucky day.
Accidents are waiting: in ambush and surprise.
Facile gods are feting, and rolling cosmic dice.

Fickle luck is flagrant, to rob us of the prize.
Fate then 'ups the ante', like sight lost from the eyes.
Struck down in the random violence, of disease or natural cause;
senses turned internal, blind to the outside world.
But there is a Blind Society, that sees the simple truth:
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C. P. Sharma 14 November 2008
Poetry and purpose are packed in your poem. Loved it. CP
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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008
Great poem. Really shows off your talent to the world (in a good way) keep writing :)
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Don Mcwilliams 03 March 2008
Nice David. You did well holding the rhyme scheme together without your lines losing their strength. Best, Don
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Catlin Crawford 21 July 2006
David, you have a talent... keep writing! -Cat
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Esther Leclerc 28 February 2006
A worthy theme; thanks for exploring it so well.
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