Blinded Eye Poem by Kelly Vinal

Blinded Eye

Rating: 4.3


Turn another blinded eye, oblivious
To cattail meadows strewn sea-to-sea -
Each stalk, brazed by arctic incursions
And baked by the sun in May.
Turn it over, the fortune card, reveal
What God has granted tomorrow -
A twilight storm or rolling foment -
Behind each prize-door,
Incontrovertible evidence
For your prosecution.

Turn another blinded eye, oblivious
To withered lake-front phantoms
Haunting shoreline stores - every
Ghostly voice of panic, unanswered on the
Glassy channels, just meters beyond
The undertow signs.
What is it that serves as your marker?
Your mentor? Your master? Your Maker?
Make your prize-door choices now -
One, two, three.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon Whild 22 October 2005

I loved the passage: 'To withered lake-front phantoms Haunting shoreline stores - every Ghostly voice of panic, unanswered on the Glassy channels, just meters beyond The undertow signs.' What superb imagery! Overall, this poem speaks volumes to me. More than I can write here.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 29 December 2004

Thought-provoking.Simply superb.

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Lenchen Elf 05 December 2004

excellent, thank you

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

Homestead, Florida
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