Santosh Sharma


Bliss Full Life - Poem by Santosh Sharma

Life is moving as per your ordained role
Steps are following the path as directed by your might
But still there are prayers for thou grace
Never awaken us for hatred, jealous, anger and greed
Never there be a day of fight for a piece of land
With my neighbour nor any one of the clan
Never to dwarf any one to raise my hand
Never to be a part of whirlwind
Forced to ignore the smiles of loved one
Empower us with wisdom and strength
Could move on the path of love and co-existence.
Oh lord, bless our life as you have blessed the flower
Admired as a bud, loved when blossomed
Respected till the last petal is dropped on the ground


Comments about Bliss Full Life by Santosh Sharma

  • (7/9/2011 11:21:00 AM)

    So true and soft! I like this poem so much! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/7/2011 11:35:00 AM)

    I like this poem. It really is a good poem about the life which is blistful. Like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa (7/7/2011 10:20:00 AM)

    Great lyrics' so real..... (Report)Reply

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  • Hans Vr (7/1/2011 2:27:00 AM)

    Santosh,
    I like this poem very much. I like the title a lot. Somehow all of us want a blissful life but why so few of us want to live according to the priniciples that bring about a blissful life. You very well outlined some fo these prinicples in this fantastic poem. The end of the poem is really touching my heart. So nicely said.
    Congrats, Santosh.
    A masterpiece.
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  • Omar Jabak (6/30/2011 1:17:00 PM)

    The general idea of the poem is absolutely great. However, I feel as if your poems are translated into English. I might be wrong! Still, I think you are a very sensitive person capable of expressing yourself very eloquently. Keep up the good work! ! (Report)Reply

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  • K J (6/29/2011 2:37:00 PM)

    I'm guessing it about rivalry with Neighbouring country and your views of peace and tranquility. A follower of the Mahatma, I think you are. Neverthless, well written and compassionate. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/29/2011 9:59:00 AM)

    had many symbols of life and i liked it but it depends on who is reading it to get there own understanding (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh T A (6/27/2011 11:26:00 AM)

    Nice poem to read on blissful life! I enjoyed imagining about this life! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/25/2011 10:49:00 PM)

    Its written so lovely
    Rated it a 10
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  • Ace Of Black Hearts (6/25/2011 12:59:00 PM)

    Bliss, is but the absence of the sadness all around us. Oh beautiful ignorance of that which do not need. In a moment utmost happiness utopia, a euphoria of our making we do try live.

    This is a great poem, keep up you excellent writing
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  • (6/25/2011 6:03:00 AM)

    'Oh lord, bless our life as you have blessed the flower.
    Admired as a bud, loved when blossomed.
    Respected till the last petal is dropped on the ground.....'
    excellent metaphor sir, loved it.....
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  • (6/24/2011 11:01:00 AM)

    ya...blissful! a plea for the divine presence (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/24/2011 4:53:00 AM)

    A nice piece of peom. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    E.K.L.
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  • Abhay Vignesh L (6/23/2011 11:43:00 AM)

    powerful language and good feel.....Keep up the good work, sir (Report)Reply

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  • (6/21/2011 12:11:00 PM)

    it was beautifull and well written inspiring to many great piece (Report)Reply

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  • (6/21/2011 12:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful prayer, Santosh, a delight and a heart felt write (Report)Reply

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  • (6/16/2011 5:09:00 PM)

    very nice and a blissful poem. thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Miroslava Odalovic (6/15/2011 1:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, guess we learn the bliss by learning the abyss first. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/14/2011 1:10:00 AM)

    indeed a very nice poem. The last three line brings out the best in you. simply superb. Narayanan (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2011 12:04:00 AM)

    Humble appeal to the almighty to keep one calm and graceful. It is really soothing to my heart.Thanks for sharing such a humble poem.Rekhamandagere (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011


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