Bliss Full Life

Rating: 5.0
Life is moving as per your ordained role
Steps are following the path as directed by your might
But still there are prayers for thou grace
Never awaken us for hatred, jealous, anger and greed
Never there be a day of fight for a piece of land
With my neighbour nor any one of the clan
Never to dwarf any one to raise my hand
Never to be a part of whirlwind
Forced to ignore the smiles of loved one
Empower us with wisdom and strength
Could move on the path of love and co-existence.
Oh lord, bless our life as you have blessed the flower
Admired as a bud, loved when blossomed
Respected till the last petal is dropped on the ground
Sunday, June 12, 2011
Undine Roxie 09 July 2011
So true and soft! I like this poem so much!
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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011
I like this poem. It really is a good poem about the life which is blistful. Like it.
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Great lyrics' so real.....
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Hans Vr 01 July 2011
Santosh, I like this poem very much. I like the title a lot. Somehow all of us want a blissful life but why so few of us want to live according to the priniciples that bring about a blissful life. You very well outlined some fo these prinicples in this fantastic poem. The end of the poem is really touching my heart. So nicely said. Congrats, Santosh. A masterpiece.
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Omar Jabak 30 June 2011
The general idea of the poem is absolutely great. However, I feel as if your poems are translated into English. I might be wrong! Still, I think you are a very sensitive person capable of expressing yourself very eloquently. Keep up the good work! !
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K J 29 June 2011
I'm guessing it about rivalry with Neighbouring country and your views of peace and tranquility. A follower of the Mahatma, I think you are. Neverthless, well written and compassionate.
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Hilton Ball 29 June 2011
had many symbols of life and i liked it but it depends on who is reading it to get there own understanding
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Ramesh T A 27 June 2011
Nice poem to read on blissful life! I enjoyed imagining about this life!
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Narina Jones 25 June 2011
Its written so lovely Rated it a 10
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Ace Of Black Hearts 25 June 2011
Bliss, is but the absence of the sadness all around us. Oh beautiful ignorance of that which do not need. In a moment utmost happiness utopia, a euphoria of our making we do try live. This is a great poem, keep up you excellent writing
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